chapter 1: Pages 1-5
Jul 03, 2017
Creator
hi, so this is the first page so tell me what you think can you read all the lettering? does the conversation flow correctly ?
if you like it or have an issue leave some feedback or a heart!
Top comment
There are some grammatical mistakes, but it's not too bad that it's a distraction. Pretty good start for an artist just starting their own webcomic.
Recommendation for you
Recommendation
Long Exposure
LGBTQ+ 2.3m likes
Recommendation
Vamp Sabbath
Mystery 380.8k likes
Recommendation
Humor me
Slice of life 2.8m likes
Recommendation
Heartstopper
LGBTQ+ 6.7m likes
Recommendation
Strange and Wild
BL 514.6k likes
Recommendation
Out of the Blue
Romance 2.4m likes
Feeling lucky
Random series you may like
1.1k views33 subscribers
Comments (1)
See all