Ch1: 1st Live on Earth pg 11
Jan 14, 2018
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...you gotta help Yuuki out Aimi!
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Ann Maulina (VIP Pass Holder) who creates the beautiful Raruurien comic found here raruurien.com/
also for our literal second Patron, Mharz! Who creates the MMA webcomic "Champ"
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Check their comic out its all great!
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I think the idea of the planet earth being nothing but a Hollywood/entertainment capitol of the universe is a fun and creative idea. Because there's not a lot of pages to access the entirety of the series I can't make a lot of comments or thoughts, but I will say this.
I think the art is quite beautiful, I like the designs of the characters, and as I mentioned before your backgrounds are nice and don't feel bland.
I think the story concept is indeed creative. Hopefully there will be more to it so please don't give up if you ever feel you're not going anywhere with your comic. I honestly don't see a reason for anyone to think ill of this concept it's rather cute.
I think your characters are likeable even though I admit I do kind of want to hate Aimi for doing such a horrible act of stealing another persons only means to food.
I guess I should mention that the thing that bothers me entirely is... some minor grammatical errors, but honestly I've read worst. Hope you don't mind a sub :)
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