chapter 1 soul marionette: page 3
Jan 01, 2018
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might I suggest more bend visible in the leading knee of the child? the foot perspective seems a tad odd. and the last page needs lettered with a larger print in my opinion.
also, this story is pretty neat. It's kind of like the bible, with fantasy elements amplified. Like how I would imagine my brother's idea sometimes.
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