

P.10 - Chap. 1
Aug 11, 2017
Creator
I can't believe I'm already almost at the half of the first chapter. I've asked for a lot of feedback and critism lately, so thank you for everyone who gave me advices.
I will try to improve even more in the future.
Also, I've realized there's a lot of confusion with the characters. I will draw some character sheets as soon as I can, and I hope that this will help!
Lastly, sorry that this page is a bit late. I usually try to upload the pages every monday and friday at 8AM PST but I didn't draw fast enough today//
Have a great weekend!
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That much hair looks difficult :) I am enjoying the progression of the story, it's a nice thing after work :)
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