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Mar 16, 2017
Creator
Major improvement incoming. I added panel thickness... It looks incredibly professional :P . Also, as I read the whole comic again, I figured that the way I portray this story looks kind of boring. So I tried to add a bit more of difference when it comes to scene portrayal. This might lead to some.... whacky results (apologies, I'm still learning.)
Also, the story might be confusing at this point, but I REALLY hope it will all clear up with the next pages.
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Eat a piece of candy. That helps.
Have a nice day.
TheSilentOne
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ooh the panel does make it look much neater and I love your improvement on the scene's framing. Also i know the end part is supposed to be heartwarming but the main character's shock makes me laugh xD for some reason. Don't mind me I still enjoy your work~~
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