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Sep 04, 2016
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Love how you showed her drowning, the movement of the water around her, and the air leaving her as she drowns. What will happen next? ^^ || Also, some corrections if I may: "rocks in the sea" or "rocks at sea" (if she's far from the shore), "I hit one of them", " the fear took control of me". ||Great story so far, keep it up! :D
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