The Unexpected Wake-up Call
Jan 17, 2025
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I like really it so far! I will give feedback only because you said it was cool, but will delete it after a couple of days.
It’s nicely paced and I’m beginning to get a feel for the characters. (Also is the boss-man mixed, or…?).
I will say the repeated description of how their actions/qualities come across (i.e., “deep, velvety” being used 3x here, or last episode his smile being repeatedly described as charming)…is redundant. And it is, personally, catching more of my attention than I’d like. I couldn’t tell if this was what Minjun focused on in his perception of Mr. boss-man, or if you were trying to drive home this characterization. Either way, it pull my focus away momentarily when it happens.
But yeah, overall these two are really growing on me and I’m excited to read more!
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