Chapter 1, Page 10 - The Zig Leaveth.
Aug 13, 2023
Hi Reader,
Sorry, not a new page but I reworked this page, the last three panels needed to be changed for better storytelling. I introduced the ziggurats instead. I'm sending out a reset notice so my readers will not be puzzled when they see the same three panels in the future.
This took a while. Between life and low grade depression, there were days where I couldn't get any artwork done. (shrug) On bad days it felt like I was in double gravity and wading through deep snow. Working on my depression so that's improving. I did discover that maxing out on Fish Oil helped me keep the symptoms much more manageable.
Words for the google translator
la mortintoj audeblas
hej
spoke
Decided to try a coloring schemes. Sticking to pale colors instead of the full intensity overload. Changed how Davi's ghost voice is shown. It looks better with a wavery line. I'll have to go back and retro fit the previous pages eventually.
I really like how the middle three panels turned out, both art and words.
Hope you will comment. I enjoy the feedback.
- Dex
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I do not claim to be making great art, but I made THIS art and I do not consent that any AI scraper or AI company can use it as a data point to help take work away from a working artist.
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