
Chapter 1 Page 10
Feb 05, 2016
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This page was a pain. So many times where I had background overlapping characters and then having part of the same character overlapping part of the background. I should plan that better in the future.
In panel 4 I was stumped a bit.
I wasn't sure whether or not to put the night shade over the background, and I also considered not having any night shade at all. I decided to go with this one, where the night shade is only over Lubo and Luna.
The Japanese in Panel 3 (ドーン) reads as "doon" which is usually used for a big impact. And sometimes for dramatic effect.
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