Chapter 1, Page 3
Jan 19, 2023
Creator
Hi Reader,
"I'm a lumberjack and I'm OK
I sleep all night and I work all day"
Twang!
Pretty sure my pacing sucks on this page, jumping from the ghosts back to Bruno and Fionn but cannot be helped. In this world, ghosts can call up the ghosts of things past, so if you squint, he's reading Dragonriders of Pern and Wynd and Locke and Key. The kid has good taste in books, obviously.
- Dex
P.S. Ran headlong into the "explicit mature content" wall. Still figuring out what the "Mature Rating" does. I thought tagging it as "Mature w nudity" would let showing butts would be safe, but obviously it was not.
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Top comment
You're able to fit so much information into a single panel while still making it flow naturally with the story and the dialogue. I just wanted to validate that. Especially since this is a sci-fi fantasy story/comic where major world building comes into play.
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