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Oct 15, 2022
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Fubuki whyyy. Why cant you just sit there and be pretty ;-;
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i’m play editor for a sec. overall the story is good
feels a lil dry. the art style is perfect for the you tho but at the same time leaves lots to desire. the style is sketchy it works but leaves a lot to be desired. main thing for me is the backgrounds. you can use that white void to your advantage create some atmosphere around your characters. i’m just an editor as a hobby from reading to much manga so i don’t really what’s best but i’ll try to help since it’s a fresh start. no need to take my advice just thinking of some ideas
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