Chapter I :: page 1
Dec 29, 2015
I edited it so it's more readable.
I didn't really want to edit the artwork, (I don't have time and it'd just be too long) but I edited a lot of dialogue and panel placements in an attempt to make it more readable. (some of the panels turned out a little fuzzy sorry about that!)
Tell me your thoughts! I might add an intro that gives more backstory, like a preview or something with drawings and such.
Thanks for reading!
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