Jaffa Cakes and Ludo
Sep 24, 2021
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Father Christmas Egg and Pocahontas Egg walk off together into the sunrise, and it only goes downhill from there.
THE END!
Soundtrack: “Charlotte Anne” by Julian Cope
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Delightful. However, I do feel that the comic lost a lot of its initial momentum and entertainment value once F.C. Egg got thrown into the mix. I am very much being overly harsh on a comic about eggs that intentionally chose to abruptly make Santa Claus the focus midway through, but I do want to share my thoughts as honestly as I am able. But besides that, I think that a work such as yours really does explore the benefits of Tapas, namely complete total narrative freedom. On that note, consider a typical Tapas work featuring a young brave hero and what have you, only for it to be interrupted with an unrelated character that details the plot similar to yours. Wouldn't that be fun? Well, I'll certainly read whatever else you happen to make (if you ever do, of course) and I'll think about releasing something of my own one of these days.
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