Crumble Beginnings
Aug 08, 2021
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For the fourth time, Donnie is entering Middle School. Troubled, and wishing to better himself, he meets AJ, a new student, and his newly discovered next-door neighbor, whom he attempts to help with her own troubles.
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This is pretty good so far! I like the art style and the Jerry segment. I also feel kinda bad for Donnie. He doesn't seem insane, just misguided; but AJ on the other hand... lol. Something I noticed, sometimes the text was a little blurry and tough to read when the font size was decreased to fit the bubbles—not terribly so, just a little bit for me personally. Other than that, keep up the good work!
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