Espisode 1 part 3
Nov 14, 2015
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sorry for the few pages, i thought update till tomorrow, but im going out of my city for a few days and i can't work on The Music Box Ripper until I come back, so i didn't want leave the story too much, especially when many of you subscribing and liked.
Im very very grateful for that QuQ I don't have words to thank, all of you are beautiful >///<
So, here is the presentation of Derek, the heroe in the story i think. He is very smart, and for that reason he skipped a lot of levels in his education.
He wants to be part of FBI in order to capture Serial Killers like the one who killed his whole family.
Well, that's all for today.
I almost forget it, English isn't my birth language... so if my words, sentences or writing are incorrect, I would greatly appreciate if you let me know, please n_n
I wanna learn.
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se necesita poner un poco mas de cosas en el fondo y evitar usar fotografias reales , fuera de eso todo muy padre
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