as I lie awake
Jul 06, 2021
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One can really feel the character's internal struggle into madness, loneliness, paranoia and pain. The neighbors complaints and the protagonists scarred throat were excellent additions.
ps. Is the last sentence missing a comma or something? (after flying)
Awesome work keep it up! :D
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