A Foolish Mistake Part(8)
Sep 08, 2015
Possibly the last part before chapter 2!
PunishedKom
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'Occurrence' not 'Accurance'. I'd recommend getting a proofreader or at least spellcheck because I love this story and art but the constant typos and grammar issues are a little much. Great start so far!
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