Chapter 17
Sep 07, 2020
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Recommended Musical Accompaniment is Butter Teeth by The Mountain Goats.
I was really bumping against my deadline to finish this one! Time to get started on the next now...
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I can see why you bumping against the deadline; that was one long satisfying update!
I like the shadowing in the porch scene. :-)
It's heartbreaking about Mike. Listening to him you get this sense that he's a dyed-in-the-wool criminal.
Look deeper and there's a possible learning disorder, probable behavior disorder, cognitive disorder. But you can tell he's "normal bright".
Take the same Mike package and have it incarnate into a place of means and opportunities, and you'd get a guy that could do well in some conventional career track.
Ach, here I am acting like a fan-girl trying to save favorite characters!
Skippy, I'm glad you let us see the title of the book Rip is reading. Whether randomly assigned or thoughtfully assigned, Rip can probably relate a lot more to this book than say, Catcher In the Rye.
Ha! I bet Mike would relate better to that one!
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