All That Glitters, Part 3
Jul 18, 2019
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I like the overall design of the characters, the jewel demon (not sure what to call it) was a nice design overall and a quite good idea. im getting a feeling of the Kingdom Hearts series in the story telling and somewhat a naruto style feeling from your style. eyes aspecially. Where these inspirations?
other than that, i am struggling a bit to get into this. that is my main problem, not yours.
i see something i had when i started out a long time ago with overall comic creation. i was quite fixated on Action, up to the point allot of the essential things kind of fell apart. this is not the case here but, its a overall major presence of action i feel that confused me when characters expressed frustration towards something. it can be a bit confusing in this case that since we dont know the characters long enough or enough info about them.
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