Consumption pages 13-15
Aug 16, 2018
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Pages 13, 14 and 15.
Mature content warning- Laura is still deformed also a severed arm ;)
Pacing feels a bit off in this section.... eh, I'm learning.
Page 13
Had fun with the Layout of this page.
You're all gonna think I'm so weird.
Page 14
I really wanted to put "omnomnom" in the third panel, but that seemed too silly.
The last panel looks so ugly. I wanted it to be clear that Laura was looking healthier but I went waaaaay overboard. Like she is now a bodybuilder. I know its bad. I was trying my best. I had her pajamas still fit even after she changes shape because I did not want to draw her bursting out of them (or the subsequent nudity) Artistic license or something.
Page 15
Jarring style shift. Oops.
OMG the ugly hands won't go away. *sobbing*
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